92.The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar diagram illustrates the amounts of first place by electricity
production
and Use synonyms
consumption
of electric energy in ten countries for the year 2014.
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Overall
, it can be easily seen that China and the United States Linking Words
rates
are significantly higher than in any other country. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
consumption
of electricity in all countries is lower than Use synonyms
production
except for Germany.
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To begin
with, China is inLinking Words
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the
production
and Use synonyms
consumption
and they are at Use synonyms
an almost similar
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almost similar rates
an almost similar rate
rates
around 5.3 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
. Use synonyms
Following
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this
, in second place is the US with approximately 4 and 3.8 Linking Words
billion
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kWh
for Use synonyms
production
and Use synonyms
consumption
, respectively.
Russia's electric energy Use synonyms
production
and Use synonyms
consumption
is in third place after the US and accounted for just over 1 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, it is the Linking Words
last
country whose Linking Words
rates
of Use synonyms
production
and Use synonyms
consumption
are above 1 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
. The remaining countries have quite similar Use synonyms
rates
with around 0.5 Use synonyms
billion
. Germany's Use synonyms
consumption
rate is slightly higher than Use synonyms
production
and each of those are comprised around 0.5 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, consumption, rates, billion, kwh with synonyms.
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