92.The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

92.The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar diagram illustrates the amounts of
production
and
consumption
of electric energy in ten countries for the year 2014.
Overall
, it can be easily seen that China and the United States
rates
are significantly higher than in any other country.
Moreover
, the
consumption
of electricity in all countries is lower than
production
except for Germany.
To begin
with, China is in
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the
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first place by electricity
production
and
consumption
and they are at
an almost similar
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almost similar rates
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rates
around 5.3
billion
kWh
.
Following
this
, in second place is the US with approximately 4 and 3.8
billion
kWh
for
production
and
consumption
, respectively. Russia's electric energy
production
and
consumption
is in third place after the US and accounted for just over 1
billion
kWh
.
Furthermore
, it is the
last
country whose
rates
of
production
and
consumption
are above 1
billion
kWh
. The remaining countries have quite similar
rates
with around 0.5
billion
. Germany's
consumption
rate is slightly higher than
production
and each of those are comprised around 0.5
billion
kWh
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dual aspect
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • industrial base
  • population size
  • significant difference
  • surplus
  • deficit
  • electrical energy
  • ranking
  • economic patterns
  • industrial patterns
  • technological advancements
  • disparity
  • industrial development
  • economic capabilities
  • anomalies
  • export
  • import
  • energy efficiency
  • waste
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