92.The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

92.The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar diagram illustrates the amounts of
production
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and
consumption
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of electric energy in ten countries for the year 2014.
Overall
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, it can be easily seen that China and the United States
rates
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are significantly higher than in any other country.
Moreover
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, the
consumption
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of electricity in all countries is lower than
production
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except for Germany.
To begin
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with, China is in
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the
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first place by electricity
production
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and
consumption
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and they are at
an almost similar
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almost similar rates
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rates
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around 5.3
billion
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kWh
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.
Following
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this
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, in second place is the US with approximately 4 and 3.8
billion
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kWh
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for
production
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and
consumption
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, respectively. Russia's electric energy
production
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and
consumption
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is in third place after the US and accounted for just over 1
billion
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kWh
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.
Furthermore
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, it is the
last
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country whose
rates
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of
production
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and
consumption
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are above 1
billion
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kWh
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. The remaining countries have quite similar
rates
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with around 0.5
billion
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. Germany's
consumption
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rate is slightly higher than
production
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and each of those are comprised around 0.5
billion
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kWh
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, consumption, rates, billion, kwh with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • dual aspect
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • industrial base
  • population size
  • significant difference
  • surplus
  • deficit
  • electrical energy
  • ranking
  • economic patterns
  • industrial patterns
  • technological advancements
  • disparity
  • industrial development
  • economic capabilities
  • anomalies
  • export
  • import
  • energy efficiency
  • waste
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