The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
Two pie charts compare the rationales of immigration to and emigration from the UK in 2007, measured in percentages.
Overall
, working purposes had the lion's Linking Words
shares
in both categories, Fix the agreement mistake
share
while
the lowest Linking Words
proportions
of reasons for emigration was formal study and no reason stated for immigration.
Fix the agreement mistake
proportion
To begin
with, 30% of the total population moved to the country because of their jobs, followed by studying purposes with a mere 4% Linking Words
from
that number. Change preposition
of
Subsequently
, half of the individuals who came for job purposes were in fact migrated to the UK to join their companions. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
jobseekers
and unspecified reasons accounted for 12% and 11% respectively. Other than that, people moved to said nation without any reason Correct your spelling
job seekers
took
for only half of the jobseekers' ratio.
Wrong verb form
taking
On the other hand
, the former habitats of the UK who moved out from the country Linking Words
was
Change the verb form
were
also
for the sake of their careers with a mere 1% Linking Words
from
workers who migrated to the area. Afterwards, 22% of the total population were people who travelled outside the region to find jobs and 18% of the total had no specific rationale, followed by Change preposition
of
other
with a 4% difference from jobseekers, and Fix the agreement mistake
others
accompany
reasons with a mere 1% from unspecified aims. Wrong verb form
accompanied
Lastly
, studying abroad was the least reason with only 4% of the total population.Linking Words
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