The map shows the center of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant.
The
center
of Change the spelling
centre
Paris
map illustrates two potential places for a restaurant. In Correct article usage
the Paris
this
essay
we will make a comparison between the north and south of Add a comma
essay,
Paris
area to find which is the better one.
Correct article usage
the Paris
Location
1 is on the North Bank, between Westminster Underground Station and 10 Downins street
with Capitalize word
Street
nearby
office. Add an article
the nearby
a nearby
This
location
is opposite the London Eye with
the same distance from Change preposition
at
the
Westminster Bridge and Correct article usage
apply
Jubille
Bridge.
Correct your spelling
Jubilee
Location
1 would be good for the 2000 worker
who work at 10 Fix the agreement mistake
workers
downing street
and Correct your spelling
Downing Street
nearby
office from Monday to Friday. Correct article usage
the nearby
Additionaly
, there would Correct your spelling
Additionally
also
200
customers from Big Ben Add a missing verb
be 200
towar
Correct your spelling
Towers
everyday
, Replace the word
every day
Location
2 is on the south bank of the river thames
, between the London Eye and the Change the capitalization
Thames
sealife
London Aquarium. Capitalize word
Sealife
This
play near
the east of Add a missing verb
is near
park
.
The advantage of setting up shop here for sandwiches Add an article
the park
are
that it attracts 13,000 visitors from well-known tourist destination Change the verb form
is
everyday
. These customers could stroll to Replace the word
every day
as
Correct your spelling
a
neighboring
Change the spelling
neighbouring
pakr
or go along the river to eat.Correct your spelling
park
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