The map shows the center of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant.

The map shows the center of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant.
The
center
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of
Paris
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the Paris
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map illustrates two potential places for a restaurant. In
this
essay
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we will make a comparison between the north and south of
Paris
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the Paris
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area to find which is the better one.
Location
1 is on the North Bank, between Westminster Underground Station and 10 Downins
street
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with
nearby
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the nearby
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office.
This
location
is opposite the London Eye
with
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the same distance from
the
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apply
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Westminster Bridge and
Jubille
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Jubilee
Bridge.
Location
1 would be good for the 2000
worker
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workers
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who work at 10
downing street
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Downing Street
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and
nearby
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office from Monday to Friday.
Additionaly
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, there would
also
200
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customers from Big Ben
towar
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Towers
everyday
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,
Location
2 is on the south bank of the river
thames
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, between the London Eye and the
sealife
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London Aquarium.
This
play
near
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is near
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the east of
park
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the park
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. The advantage of setting up shop here for sandwiches
are
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that it attracts 13,000 visitors from well-known tourist destination
everyday
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. These customers could stroll to
as
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a
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neighboring
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pakr
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park
or go along the river to eat.
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