The pie chart below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malasia in the year 2010
The pie chart illustrates Japanese and Malaysian 5 distinct household types in per cent in the year 2010.
Overall
, 2 out of 5 expenditures named housing and transport had big differences from each other. Meanwhile, other facilities in 2 countries had a similar level.
In Malaysia
other goods and services presenting
just over Replace the word
present
the
quarter of all items, Correct article usage
a
that
is less Correct pronoun usage
which
for
3% Change preposition
than
from
Change preposition
than
Japan
that
count 29%. Correct pronoun usage
which
Also
, the same count of difference was in health care. Where
Rephrase
apply
Japan
account 6
% and Change preposition
for 6
Malaysia
3% which was lowest
of the year. Correct article usage
the lowest
However
, number
of food little bit varied, Malaysian accounted Change the article
a number
the number
27
% and Japanese 24%.
The usage of transport in Change preposition
for 27
Japan
presents 20% which is a fifth of all environments. They are 2 times more than the users of the vehicle from Malaysia
which calculate
only 10%. The subscriber of housing in Correct subject-verb agreement
calculates
Malaysia
is the biggest one in both of
countries. They count 34% more than Change preposition
apply
Japan
at 13%.Submitted by aikumarbekarys on
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