The graph below gives information about the number of Catholics residing in different nations.
The bar chart depicts how many
Catholics
lived in China, India, Philippines, Vietnam, Korea and Japan
between 2010 and 2013.
Overall
, these two years Philippines show
the maximum number of Wrong verb form
showed
Catholics
and Japan
are
the lowest Christians living among these nations.
In 2010, most of the Unnecessary verb
apply
Catholics
were living in the Phillippines about 75,940,000. Then
Japan
a minimal value of Catholics
lived in 2010. It is about 400,000. Vietnam and Korea are a slightly similar amount of Catholics
. They are 5,590,000 and 5,270,000 respectively.
After three years, in 2013 Phillippines had the highest value of Catholics
. It is about 72,000,000, but this
amount is slightly less than the Phillippines in 2010. Eventhough
, China and India Correct your spelling
Even though
become
the maximum Wrong verb form
became
Catholics
in 2013. It is about 15,000,000 and 19,000,000 orderly. Correct quantifier usage
number of Catholics
That is
a considerable value of Catholics
residing in these countries. However
, over these two years, the spread of Catholics
in Vietnam and Japan
did not show a considerable amount.Submitted by dinupremarathna on
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