The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words.
The map illustrates the differences
of
the directory in Change preposition
between
central
library 20 years ago and today.
Overview, Correct article usage
the central
Majority
of the interior Correct article usage
The Majority
had
changed and the only section that Wrong verb form
has
still
available is the adult fiction Add a missing verb
is still
books
aisle
. In centre
of the library in the past had space to read where tables and chairs were available but nowadays it has been removed.
In the central library these days, there is a cafe at the right side of the entrance where people can read Add an article
the centre
while
enjoying their beverages, before
it was an enquiry desk where people Correct word choice
apply
gone
to get tickets or to return Add the auxiliary verb
went
have gone
books
. However
, it has been replaced with self-service machines next to the cafe. At the left side of the entrance
there is a computer Add a comma
entrance,
room
which in the past was a reading room
. Beside the computer room
, an aisle
has been built where all reference books
are available, it replaced an
adult fiction Correct article usage
apply
books
sections which are now on the opposite side with the size of the aisle
has been reduced.
At the end
of the left corner from entrance
, the Add an article
the entrance
room
has been replaced from
CDs, Video, and computer Change preposition
with
game
Fix the agreement mistake
games
to
Change preposition
with
story telling
rooms and Correct your spelling
storytelling
Correct article usage
a fictions
fictions
Change the noun form
fiction
books
aisle
for children. Meanwhile, in
the opposite, it Change preposition
on
is
a lecture Wrong verb form
was
room
now
which was a section for children's Rephrase
apply
books
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, aisle, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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