the diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 200 years ago and how it looks now. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the development of
central
Correct article usage
the central
library
throughout
20 years.
Evidently, it has been Change preposition
over
remodeled
to a large extent and some spaces and facilities have been provided as well, making the Change the spelling
remodelled
library
more attractive to visitors.
Before updating, to the left side of the entrance
a reading Add a comma
entrance,
room
with newspapers and magazines was placed and to the right, there was an enquiry desk that was in charge of tickets and book returns. Two decades later, however
, both sections have been replaced with computer
Correct article usage
a computer
room
and café respectively. Change preposition
In
To
the central area of the Change preposition
In
room
, there are no longer tables and chairs and also
adult fiction Rephrase
apply
books
on the left have been transferred to the opposite side where an information desk and self-service machines are provided in the replacement of adult non-fiction books
. Reference books
, also
, have their own places on the left-middle space of the library
.
At the back corners of the library
, there was a room
with CDs, videos and computer games on the left, which has been enlarged and now houses Children’s fiction books
. Moreover
, it has two sofas so that visitors can enjoy storytelling events that are held there. there is also
a lecture room
on the right-side
corner where Correct your spelling
right-hand
children
Change noun form
children's
books
used to be.Submitted by amansoore48 on
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