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The map below shows the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.

The map below shows the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
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The diagrams describe the transformation of a seaside area in the city of Darwin between the years 2009 and 2014.
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, there have been numerous changes made to the area, the key ones being, the addition of a university to the educational complex, the expansion of the residential constructs
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 redesigned features added to the sea sight. The top northern half has not witnessed that many reconstructions, the most significant one being the removal of the industrial zone next to the lake in the pavement space, which was replaced with a new swimming pool. The two pools at the northwest angel were untouched,
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 to the school, the convention centre and the fishing field. At the southern end of the waterfront, there have been many new buildings brought up including the university on the left-hand side.Conveniently, it is accommodated by many trees and a footpath, replacing the previously main industrial domain.
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, a harbour was brought up
at the end
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 of the newly paved walk path.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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