In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Despite the advancement in agricultural technology, many people across the globe still suffer from hunger.
This
phenomenon is caused by low productivity because farmers
cannot afford things to enhance their production
due to
financial issues. In response to this
problem, this
essay proposes the government’s role to interfere and support the local farmer in maximizing the amount of local production
.
Farmers
around the world do not have the same financial ability to afford agricultural supporting goods. This
is to say, some farmers
still use the traditional way to manage their land thus
they can not maximize the result. For example
, some farmers
use fertilizer and insecticides to promote their plants’ growth and to prevent insects from eating their plants. However
, some of them witness financial difficulty in affording these agricultural goods. Thus
their plants cannot optimally grow due to
lack of nutrients and the inteferention of animals. This
causes a lower amount of produce and cannot meet the demands.
The solution to this
problem is to give financial aid, especially the farmers
who have limited funds. The local government can provide cash to them or supply fertilizers and insecticides for those who need them. By doing so, the amount of crops produced by the local farmers
will increase and thus
will be able to meet the market demands. For instance
, the municipality of Bantul provided aid for farmers
through supplying free fertilizers in 2021. In the following months, the authorities recorded there was an increase in the local production
of rice.
In conclusion, hunger in many areas can be caused by people’s limited budget which hinders their production
. Therefore
, the authorities’ role in providing aid for them is needed to increase local production
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coherence cohesion
While your essay does have a logical structure, consider a clearer organization of your ideas. Transitions between paragraphs and ideas could be improved for better flow and clarity. It will help the reader to follow your line of reasoning more easily if you use more cohesive devices and varying linking words.
task achievement
Your response to the task was adequate but lacked depth in examining the complexity of global hunger. You did not fully elaborate on the diverse causes and potential solutions. Next time, try to provide a more comprehensive analysis of the issue by discussing a range of factors and a variety of possible interventions.