Boxing is a bloody sport that often results in physical injuries. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue,

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Boxing, which is

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and dangerous

sports

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, should be banned in

this

contemporary era because of the regular occurrence of

injuries

to its participants.

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I agree

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viewpoint, there are some merits of playing

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high intensity

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sports

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.

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essay discusses and elaborates why I partially agree that

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Boxing should be ceased to exist. The main reason why I believe that Boxing should be banned is because

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a threat to the life of contestants. Given that the player scores a point by hitting an opponent on the face, fatal

injuries

could happen

as a result

due to

the consistent punches by the opponent to the unexposed body parts.

For example

, the swollen eyes and bleeding on

forehead

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, the boxer falling unconscious because of the knockout punch, are some of the instances that

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me to believe that

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Boxing is an unsafe sport. Another factor that makes to think that

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Boxing should be forbidden is that

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it makes the participants aggressive in

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real life. I opine that because exhibiting

foreciousness

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voraciousness

and ruthlessness is an important aspect of

this

game to win the match; if a player

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with the

injuries

and suffering of his opponent, he might lose the match by virtue of his decreased intensity.

Consequently

, the regular practice of aggression around the clock

while

training makes the participants vulnerable to

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those violent traits.

On the other hand

, some people think that

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Boxing is auspicious for individuals because it augments fitness levels and is

also

a medium to release their negativity.It encourages the athletes to exert more

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at the gym to improve their Boxing skills.

While

exercising more causes more dopamine release, which increases happiness and reduces stress, endurance and resistance training

increases

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musculoskeletal strength. In conclusion, it is true that there are some merits of

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boxing for the

overall

wellbeing, I argue that the inherent concerns of causing major

injuries

and inculcating aggressive behavioural tendencies cannot be overlooked.

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, I somewhat agree that

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Boxing should be forbidden and the players who like it must exercise extreme caution to prevent its negative impact.