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The bar chart shows the number of tourists visiting Country X from various parts of the world and the table displays the income of different businesses in the nation in 2007 and 2008.

The bar chart shows the number of tourists visiting Country X from various parts of the world and the table displays the income of different businesses in the nation in 2007 and 2008.
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 histogram charts illustrate the quantities of visitors staying in country
X
 from different nations of the world,
whereas
, the table shows the profit of various businesses in the country between 2007 and 2008.
Overall
,
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tourist
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tourists
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 in China and Japan
most
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highest than in other countries in 2007 and in Australia, there are most highest in 2008. And
then
, In table charts illustrate the yearly income of different businesses in
X
 nation
that
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 tourism industry decreased steadily in the same period. Regarding tourists staying
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in X
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X
 nation, China and Japan come top of the list, with the visitor an average of around 3000
thousand
 individuals in 2007.
Furthermore
, in
same
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of
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period, in Australia, Europe ,
US
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the US
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 and Canada increased steadily above 2000
thousand
persons
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people
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.
However
, Individuals who visited
X
 county in 2008 from
US
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the US
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 and Canada went down
at
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to
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 under 500
thousand
 people.
Likewise
, Europe, Australia, China and Japan most popular
at
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with
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 above
1000
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than 1000
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thousand
 tourists. In terms of annual income at different businesses in
X
 nations, the number of annual profit
who
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parts of
tourism
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the tourism
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 industry decreased significantly between 2019 and 2020.
Moreover
, at
hotel
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hotels
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 and
resort
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resorts
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 went down from 3,5
million
dollars
 to 0,5
million
dollars
,
whereas
, in restaurants,
bar
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bars
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 and souvenir shops fell sharply from 2,4 to 1,2 (
million
dollars
).
Accordingly
, transportation and travel agents decreased sharply from 1,3 to 0,4 (
million
dollars
),
also
 tour guides parts fell
down
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from 1,4 to 1,1 (
million
dollars
) in the same period.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words x, thousand, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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