The bar chart shows the number of tourists visiting Country X from various parts of the world and the table displays the income of different businesses in the nation in 2007 and 2008.
he
histogram charts illustrate the quantities of visitors staying in country Correct your spelling
The
X
from different nations of the world, Use synonyms
whereas
, the table shows the profit of various businesses in the country between 2007 and 2008. Linking Words
Overall
, Linking Words
this
essay will display the proportions of the number of international Linking Words
tourist
in China and Japan Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
most
highest than in other countries in 2007 and in Australia, there are most highest in 2008. And Change the adjective
apply
then
, In table charts illustrate the yearly income of different businesses in Linking Words
X
nation Use synonyms
that
tourism industry decreased steadily in the same period.
Regarding tourists stayingCorrect determiner usage
the
Change preposition
in X
X
nation, China and Japan come top of the list, with the visitor an average of around 3000 Use synonyms
thousand
individuals in 2007. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, in Linking Words
same
Correct article usage
the same
of
period, in Australia, Europe , Change preposition
apply
US
and Canada increased steadily above 2000 Correct article usage
the US
thousand
Use synonyms
persons
. Replace the word
people
However
, Individuals who visited Linking Words
X
county in 2008 from Use synonyms
US
and Canada went downCorrect article usage
the US
at
under 500 Change preposition
to
thousand
people. Use synonyms
Likewise
, Europe, Australia, China and Japan most popular Linking Words
at
above Change preposition
with
1000
Change preposition
than 1000
thousand
tourists.
In terms of annual income at different businesses in Use synonyms
X
nations, the number of annual profit Use synonyms
who
parts of Correct pronoun usage
apply
tourism
industry decreased significantly between 2019 and 2020. Correct article usage
the tourism
Moreover
, at Linking Words
hotel
and Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
resort
went down from 3,5 Fix the agreement mistake
resorts
million
Use synonyms
dollars
to 0,5 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
dollars
, Use synonyms
whereas
, in restaurants, Linking Words
bar
and souvenir shops fell sharply from 2,4 to 1,2 (Fix the agreement mistake
bars
million
Use synonyms
dollars
). Use synonyms
Accordingly
, transportation and travel agents decreased sharply from 1,3 to 0,4 (Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
dollars
), Use synonyms
also
tour guides parts fell Linking Words
down
from 1,4 to 1,1 (Rephrase
apply
million
Use synonyms
dollars
) in the same period.Use synonyms
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