The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the total of
women
and men who attended the evening courses
at an adult education centre in the year 2009. On the other hand
, the pie chart also
shows the ages of the participants
that
participated Correct pronoun usage
who
the
evening Change preposition
in the
courses
.
Overview, Language was the most popular subject among women
participants
whilst, Painting class was mostly prefered
by male Correct your spelling
preferred
students
. In contrast
, both genders seem to not enjoyed
the sculpture subject. Change the form of the verb
enjoy
For
the Change preposition
Of
participants
' ages, mostly
were coming from Rephrase
most
age
50 or over and those Replace the word
aged
who
aged under 20 were the least joined Correct pronoun usage
apply
courses
.
For the language class, it was mostly joined by women
with total
of 40 people. Meanwhile, the male Add an article
a total
students
were only half of it. Painting was mostly enjoyed by the male students
with approximately 25 males joined
the course. For the sculpture and drama Wrong verb form
joining
courses
, both were only have
10 Change the verb form
only had
of
male Change preposition
apply
students
while
for the women
, the sculpture was the least favorite
with approximately only 5 Change the spelling
favourite
participants
.
For the age, people with
aged 50 or more were more attracted to be a member of an adult education centre. It can be seen that 42% of the Change preposition
apply
member
Fix the agreement mistake
members
who
were aged 50 or more. Meanwhile, the total Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
percentage of 30-39 and 40-49 were equal with the percentage of senior members. For Change preposition
apply
adolescents
Change the noun form
adolescent
participants
, it was only 5% of the member
Fix the agreement mistake
members
who
joined Correct pronoun usage
apply
courses
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, courses, participants, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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