The given pie charts provide data about the distribution of school funds in the UK over the period of 20 years from 1981 to 2001.
The given pie charts provide data about the distribution of school funds in the UK over the period of 20 years from 1981 to 2001.
Evidently, a majority of total money was allocated to the salaries of teachers throughout,
while
insurance accounted for the lowest proportion with a constant rise during these years in contrast
to other worker's wage
that declined constantly.
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books
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in order of years.
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workers'
percent
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per cent
at
the beginning, which dropped to 22 and 15 Change the preposition
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for furniture and equipment, after decreasing from 15 in 1981 to 5 Correct your spelling
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