In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or diagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Nowadays we are living in

digital

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the digital

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world.

People

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will have a trend to read

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news papers

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newspapers

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or books online without buying hard copies. I totally agree with

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statement and I will explain the

evident

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evidence

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that support for my point of view. Mainly,

people

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choose

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method because

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apply

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they have easy access and they do not

required

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require

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additional space to store the. If you have

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an interent

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interent

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internet

facility you can access

anytime

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it anytime

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and

any where

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in the world. Especially,

people

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who have

busy

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a busy

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schedule

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schedules

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they

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apply

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like to choose

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online reading due it will

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be felxible

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felxible

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flexible

for their daily

routing

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routine

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, working moms are

busiest

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the busiest

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people

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as we know,

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she is waiting to pick

her

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up her

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son she can read the daily

news

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updates,

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and she

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does not want to waste her time.

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, readers do not want storage

facility

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facilities

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for their books and magazines.

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to that, readers

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are able

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to choose the document as per their

prefferance

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preference

preferences

and they can find different articles related to

topic

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the topic

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will help to get more information for

reader

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the reader

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, when you read a newspaper you can only read what they printed on the newspaper but if you use

internet

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the internet

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for reading you can select what you want to read (Some are like to read sports

news

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or some

are

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like to read political

news

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number

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the number

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of online readers will increase and they will

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their reading. In conclusion,

coming

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the coming

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generation will mostly prefer online reading rather than reading hard copies.

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will bring them more

benifits

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benefits

which I mentioned above in the essay, so, when compared

printed

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to printed

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books and newspapers, online reading has

lot

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a lot

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of advantages.

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Make sure that you have a clear introduction, body paragraphs and conclusion. Each paragraph should have a clear main idea, and all the subsequent sentences should expand on this.

Remember to use a range of cohesive devices properly. For instance, linking words or phrases like 'furthermore', 'in addition', and 'consequently' help to signal the relationship between ideas.

To clearly present your point of view, it is essential to provide thoughtful analysis or specific examples. Avoid general statements.

Pay attention to spelling, grammar, and punctuation, as these are critical for conveying your ideas clearly and correctly.

To fully address the prompt, make sure to discuss both sides of the argument (agree and disagree) in a balanced manner, especially if the question asks to what extent you agree or disagree.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

277 words

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