the graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries
The line chart illustrates a comparison between the number of male and female gym members in 1980 and 2010.
Initially
, males had a higher number of gym memberships, which eventually declined towards the end of the period. Linking Words
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, females showed consistent increments.
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, approximately 2000 men were members of gyms in 1980, which was nearly double that of women. Linking Words
Subsequently
, in 1995 there was a steep decline in male participation after reaching its peak in 1985. Linking Words
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trend, female membership increased by over 2500 during the same period.
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1995
there was a notable increase in male participation with numbers peaking at around 5000 individuals in 2005- almost twice as many compared to their female counterparts. Add a comma
1995,
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2010
there were fluctuations observed among female gym-goers ranging from roughly two thousand to three thousand people; Add a comma
2010,
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downward trend amounting to almost one thousand individuals less than before.Linking Words
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