The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The tables show the degrees and daylight time lengths in
London
and
Sydney
in
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a weekend in December 2018.
Overall
, there are significant variances between the two cities,
London
is much colder than
Sydney
and suffers from shorter day hours than the latter.
London
's weather changed slightly: its values are about 10 and the highest one (13) was observed on Saturday.
However
,
Sydney
's warmth averaged at 28. The lowest is 26, yet
this
was still higher than
London
's highest temperature.
London
began to enjoy the sunshine from around 8:00 am and it lasted until nearly 4:00 pm, the length is averaged 7 hours and 50 minutes.
While
people in
Sydney
saw the sunrise 2 hours earlier and the sunset occurred at 8:00pm, the duration is almost two times of
London
's. We may reasonably believe that though in the same dates, one is experiencing winter
whereas
the other is in summer.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words london, sydney with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • The tables compare
  • temperatures
  • hours of daylight
  • ranged from
  • consistently high
  • slight increase
  • remained stable
  • significantly fewer
  • enjoyed
  • overall
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