You are preparing an event in the countryside. Write a letter to your friend and ask for help with the arrangements. In your letter, •describe the event •mention what arrangements have already been made •say how your friend can help

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Dear Mike, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I'm writing to invite you and Mary to my party and ask for some help. I'm in charge of organizing the Halloween party

this

year. And we, with kids and Karen, found a great old house 100 kilometres away from the city to arrange the celebration. It'll be great! I've already bought a bunch of stuff like decorations, food and treats for neighbour's kids. And by the way, I didn't forget about your favourite wine and those nut bars for your boy. Dude, I desperately need some help with costumes and a magic wand for Penny. Could you please pick up some stuff from the delivery point near your office on Friday and bring it to the party? Say hi to Mary. I hope to see you soon. Love you, Adam

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coherence cohesion

Make sure to use clear paragraphing with each paragraph containing a single idea.

task achievement

Work on developing the description of the event to provide all required information in a more explicit way.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

140 words

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You are preparing an event in the countryside. Write a letter to your friend and ask for help with the arrangements. In your letter, •describe the event •mention what arrangements have already been made •say how your friend can help

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Children are now facing educational, social, and commercial pressure. What are the causes of these pressures? What measures can be taken to reduce them?

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