The table shows results of surveys done in in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage?

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The tables illustrate that, the surveys held in two different years regarding a city's various aspects.

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, it is apparent that health care and education were the best in both years

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the people of the city.

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, the transport facility was voted for bad services in the given periods. In detail, in 1980, 3 aspects can be seen as

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as healthcare, education and environment about 82%, 72% and 72% respectively. The survey says shops voted 24% for neither good nor bad and it was the highest among the category. Bad service was given by transport which is 32%. In the year 2010, education had voted nearly 82%.

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the top percentage among the goods. The shop was voted 24% is neither good nor bad and

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was the same proportion in the previous year. Same as in 1980 the transport system was bad in 2010 and it was 38%. Compared to 1980 people voted as bas was highest in the second given period.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

168 words

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