The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*- labelled coffee and bananas in 1994 and 2004 in five European countries.
The first table depicts the profits of fairtrade-labelled coffee in different
european
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European
countries
, in the year
1999 and in 2004. The second one shows the same data but for a different product, bananas.
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years
Overall
, the sales
increased over the years in most countries
. The rise of one product in one country does not seem parallel to the increase of
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in
sales
of the other commodity since the profits varies
.
Looking at the first table, the UK is the only country where the Change the verb form
vary
sales
of fairtrade coffee increased drastically, going from a profit of just 1.5 millions
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million
of
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millions
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million
countries
considered experienced a smaller but still impressive grow
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sales
. To mention a few, Switzerland went from 3 to 6 millions
, Belgium from 1 to 1.7.
Considering the second product, which is fairtrade bananas, the UK shows again some interesting data. In Change to singular
million
this
country in 1999 the commodity was quite popular with a yearly profit of 15 millions
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million
this
number rose to 47 millions
. Other Change to singular
million
countries
did not have such
enormous sales
and in some cases
the gain even decreased. In Sweden, Add a comma
cases,
for instance
, the 2 millions
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million
of
euros profited in 1999 dropped to 0.9 Change preposition
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millions
in 2004.Change to singular
million
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