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The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates
about
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the
someland's
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homeland's
 sort of exporting things
such
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 as meat
products
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, dairy
products
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 and international tourism in 2005, 2015 as well
future
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 projections for 2025. The data has been calibrated in terms of
billion
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.
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, it is clearly seen that the highest amount of dairy
products
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 was
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export
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,
while
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 in future the largest amount of international tourism will be
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export
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.
According to
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 the given data, in 2005 nearly 4
billion
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 non-vegetarian
products
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was
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export
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,
whereas
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, in 2025 just 2.5
billion
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 meat
products
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 will be travel.
Moreover
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, milk
products
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 were 8
billion
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 which were
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export
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. Followed by 7
billion
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 in future.
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,
a
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 increase of 2
billion
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 has been noticed in international tourism between 2015
as well as
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 2025.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words products, billion, export with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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