The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates
about
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the
someland's
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homeland's
sort of exporting things
such
as meat
products
, dairy
products
and international tourism in 2005, 2015 as well
future
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projections for 2025. The data has been calibrated in terms of
billion
.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that the highest amount of dairy
products
was
export
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,
while
in future the largest amount of international tourism will be
export
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exported
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.
According to
the given data, in 2005 nearly 4
billion
non-vegetarian
products
was
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export
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exported
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,
whereas
, in 2025 just 2.5
billion
meat
products
will be travel.
Moreover
, milk
products
were 8
billion
which were
export
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. Followed by 7
billion
in future.
Lastly
,
a
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increase of 2
billion
has been noticed in international tourism between 2015
as well as
2025.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words products, billion, export with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.

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