The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the number of

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and opening, from 2011 until 2018 from 1,000 until

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the

high number is 9,000. We start from 2011 the

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for opening is 9,000 and go down until 4,000, but the

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down and

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bit grow from 6,500 until 6,000

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grow up until 7,000

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after the closure

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grow up until 7,000 the opening after go down to 4,000 in 2012

start up

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to 6,000 from 2012-2014. But the

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just

go

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down very

dramastis

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from 7,000 in 2014 to 1,000 in 2015, in 2016 the closure

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start

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going up

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5.000 and

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continued

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until 2018 the

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is stay

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until the

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. But the openings in 2015 just go down until 4,000 again for 3 years

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and

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end

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of the

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the opening is not

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in the first but in the

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year

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the

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in

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4,000 and the

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year at 2018

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down again to 3,000 for the

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stop

poin

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.

Overal

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Overall

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the opening may be the most

consisten

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because the

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go very

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down in 2015 and

start

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up again….