Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the less of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
According to
some opinions, the loss of particular kinds of vegetation and pets is considered the most important issue nowadays, while
other people claim there are other issues in the environment which are more important. In this
essay, I discuss both views and present my viewpoint too. On the one hand, people who are interested in flowers, spend their time studying about profits of different weeds and flowers. They search to take advantage of different undergrowth to cure different diseases. Some of these greeneries have disappeared due to
different reasons. The lack of access to these herbs' species, for their medical profits, is considered the main environmental problem. Advocates of brutes consider them as a profitable element of the ecosystem. As a result
, disappearing animal species is considered the main problem in the ecosystem cycle. On the other hand
, there are several vital environmental questions in the world including climate change, greenhouse gases, plastic waste, water shortage pollution, deforestation, acid rain, water and weather and soil are polluted due to
industrial factors, while
these are vital elements for all creatures to live. Using polluted air or water provide dangerous disease for creatures. For example
, lung cancer, mental and heart disputes, and asthma are some dangerous diseases due to
polluted air. As health is the most important factor for survival, these complications deprive creatures of real life. Therefore
, advocates of this
belief agree there are more important environmental dilemmas to consider. To sum up
, although
the loss of particular kinds of home surroundings and beasts is considered an important factor in the environment, I disagree with considering it as the most important environmental problem. In my opinion, the reasons for the loss of these species should be considered as an advocate of environmental friendship, I suggest informing all people about all kinds of environmental obstacles and asking them to provide a clean habitat if it is possible for them.Submitted by nasringoli.psycolohist on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure logical sequencing of ideas and paragraphs to create a clear argument. Maintain focus on the topic throughout each paragraph, avoiding deviations or unclear transitions.
coherence cohesion
Use a variety of linking words and phrases to connect ideas and paragraphs adequately, and structure your essay with an evident introduction, body, and conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Develop your main points effectively by providing clear reasoning, detailed explanations, and evidence to support your arguments. Aim to expand on key points with specific examples and relevant details.
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Address all parts of the prompt thoroughly to ensure a complete response. Present a balanced discussion of both views and articulate your opinion clearly.
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Clarify and expand your ideas to build a comprehensive argument. Use precise vocabulary and a range of sentence structures to convey your thoughts effectively.
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Incorporate specific examples and evidence to substantiate your points. Use relevant illustrations from real-world situations, studies, or your own experience to enhance your essay's credibility.
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion