A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him on your next holiday. you are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. in your letter, Thank him for the invitation explain why you cannot come ask him about other times to visit

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Dear Ali I hope you are well. I'm writing to thank you for your kind invitation.

However

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, I'm afraid I can't come

due to

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my packed schedule. It's been great hearing from you after a

while

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. I really appreciate your invitation since we haven’t seen each other for a long time. As I told you in our previous chat, I changed my job recently and I've been working around the clock for the past few months and I absolutely need a break. Visiting Australia would have been a great idea. Do you remember Mostafa Hamed? He was the bright spark of our school and now he is the CEO of a hi-tech company and I'm working for him now. We’re running some new AI-based projects. Catching up during Christmas will be a great idea if it's ok with you, I really would like to come and unwind together for a few days. I look forward to catching up with you. Best regards, Reza

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph presents a clear main idea and avoid mixing unrelated details, such as work specifics.

coherence cohesion

Try to use a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow of ideas and organization.

task achievement

For a higher score, expand on your reasons and provide a more elaborate explanation.

task achievement

Continue to maintain a polite and friendly tone as it's suitable for this type of letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

163 words

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