The charts below show the distribution of world water and the use of water in three countries.

The charts below show the distribution of world water and the use of water in three countries.
The pie chart illustrates how
water
is distributed around the world, and the bar chart represents the proportion of its use in various countries.
Overall
the world is made of less fresh
water
and from
this
type, ice and glaciers account for a large
percent
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.
While
in Egypt and Saudia Arabia ,most of the
water
made available
are
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used for farming and similar practices, its use for
this
same purpose was the least in Canada. In the world and of all the bodies of
water
, the salty variants
accounts
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for 97% which is 30 times more than the fresh type. As for Fresh
Water
, ice and glaciers make up for more than half (79%) compared to the ground and surface types which are only 20% and 1% respectively . Egyptians are Saudi Arabians,
consume
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and consume
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most of their
water
on farm practices but
this
the
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is the
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opposite for Canadians who only use nearly 10% on agriculture.
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