With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays the growth in demand
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an online version of books causes the fall for paper ones. I am opinionated that
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edge-cutting innovation can
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series
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of benefits
such
as easy access into people’s lives,
while
others believe there are more drawbacks. On the one hand, the modest opportunity to
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capable of reading the individual’s favourite
book
online be it on the way to work or at home, makes people’s
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more convenient. The easy access
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e-books provides people a choice to enjoy
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reading
while
they are travelling without any inconvenience
such
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place for
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book
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not
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the fear
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the
book
or
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it at home.
Moreover
, there are
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numerous apps for
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reading online, which simplifies the warm’s
readers
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lives as they do not need to have a bibliotheca at home.
Therefore
, oftentimes, a person has no necessity to pay for some books or go to the public
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bibliotheca
, as he can find
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in
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the internet for free or a small charge
by
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one click.
On the other hand
, being constantly glued to devices even for leisure activities as reading a
book
, people may struggle
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electromagnetic waves occurred in the reason of
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gadgets. The time
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electronic devices not only for educational or work purposes may
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to some health issues like
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poor eye-vision or
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scoliosis.
Moreover
, some individuals who have an obsession with the 18th century and touchable paper books with their wooden smell
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will have not
witness
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this
experience during the reading
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e-books.
To sum up
, I believe there are more pros rather cons in terms of online reading as
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comfort and money spending play
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major role for most people.
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task achievement
The essay presents a clear position throughout the response. To improve the Task Achievement score, ensure that both sides of the argument are developed equally and sufficiently. While your opinion is clear, the counterargument could be better developed with more depth and detail. In addition, make sure to directly address the essay prompt by discussing whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
coherence cohesion
Work on providing clear topic sentences at the beginning of each paragraph and ensuring that the entire paragraph focuses on that single idea. Avoid introducing new points without fully developing them. Improve paragraph transitions by using a wider variety of linking words, and phrases and by developing a more logical flow between ideas.

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