With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays the growth in demand
on
an online version of books causes the fall for paper ones. I am opinionated that Change preposition
for
this
an
edge-cutting innovation can Correct article usage
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brings
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bring
series
of benefits Correct article usage
a series
such
as easy access into people’s lives, while
others believe there are more drawbacks.
On the one hand, the modest opportunity to being
capable of reading the individual’s favourite Wrong verb form
be
book
online be it on the way to work or at home, makes people’s life
more convenient. The easy access Fix the agreement mistake
lives
of
e-books provides people a choice to enjoy Change preposition
to
the
reading Correct article usage
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while
they are travelling without any inconvenience such
as no
place for Add a missing verb
having no
paper
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a paper
book
in the bag and do
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evoke
the fear Wrong verb form
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to crumple
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book
or forget
it at home. Wrong verb form
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Moreover
, there are a
numerous apps for Correct the article-noun agreement
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the
reading online, which simplifies the warm’s Correct article usage
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readers
lives as they do not need to have a bibliotheca at home. Change noun form
readers'
reader's
Therefore
, oftentimes, a person has no necessity to pay for some books or go to the public bibliotheqes
, as he can find Correct your spelling
bibliotheca
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them
in
the internet for free or a small charge Change preposition
on
by
one click.
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with
On the other hand
, being constantly glued to devices even for leisure activities as reading a book
, people may struggle from
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with
any
gadgets. The time Correct quantifier usage
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spending
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electronic devices not only for educational or work purposes may Change preposition
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leads
to some health issues like Change the verb form
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poor eye-vision or Correct article usage
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a
scoliosis. Change the article
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Moreover
, some individuals who have an obsession with the 18th century and touchable paper books with their wooden smell,
will have not Remove the comma
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witness
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witnessed
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experience during the reading the
e-books.
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To sum up
, I believe there are more pros rather cons in terms of online reading as the
comfort and money spending play Correct article usage
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the
major role for most people.Correct article usage
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