You are preparing an event in the countryside. Write a letter to your friend and ask for help with the arrangements. In your letter, •describe the event •mention what arrangements have already been made •say how your friend can help

#event #countryside #friend #arrangements #•describe #•mention #•say

Dear Kim, I hope you are doing well. I'm

orgnised

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organised

to have an

evevnt

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event

outside the city end of

this

year 2023 and I would like to ask for

the

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help.

This

event will

inclunded

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include

included

dinner and

also

some games plus

little

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a little

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music

station. I will

invited

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invite

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around 50 friends. People will have to bring their own sleeping bags. The ticket will be 150 dollars including food. Dinner I have organised with John

which he

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will lend me his BBQ and we made some meal

plan

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plans

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for dinner.

Drink

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For the drinking

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part, I will

provided

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provide

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small

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a small

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amount

Alcohol

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of Alcohol

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and

peope

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people

have to bring their own. I was hoping

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apply

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can

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could

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ask if you

can

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could

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be my hand

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set up the

music

station and

orgnised

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organise

some

music

. You have

such

a good DJ soul and you like

music

so much, I'm sure you will be my biggest help. The games I'm still looking for ideas. If you have any suggestions please let me know. If you let me know by

end

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the end

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of the month if you have time to help me or not that would be great. Kimi

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Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure your letter has a clear logical structure with one idea developed per paragraph. Use linking words to connect your ideas effectively.

Coherence and Cohesion

Always include a proper greeting and closing in your letters to ensure you meet the IELTS standards for format.

Task Achievement

Address all three bullet points mentioned in the prompt clearly and provide a sufficient amount of detail for each point.

Task Achievement

Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout your letter. While a friendly tone is suitable for writing to a friend, make sure it remains respectful and clear.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

187 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are preparing an event in the countryside. Write a letter to your friend and ask for help with the arrangements. In your letter, •describe the event •mention what arrangements have already been made •say how your friend can help

The Closing

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