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Self- practice :27/11 The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Self- practice :27/11 The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
line
 chart illustrates the number of foreign visitors to three
kind
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kinds
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 of landscapes in Europe
since
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from
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 1987 to 2007.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the
amount
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number
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 of visitors
increase
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increases
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 over the period in all types of
the
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apply
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landscapes. The lines of
lakes
 and coast have the most significant growth,
in contrast
, the mountain
line
 is more stable than the other two. The number of
the
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the line of the lake
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lakes
line
 was 10
thousands
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thousand
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 in the first
year
 which was the lowest,
however
, it reached
the
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a
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 peak in 2002
that
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when
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 the number surged to 75
thousands
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thousand
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 and it became the highest of the three lines and dropped to 50 in the next
year
.
Compare
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Compared
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 with the
lakes
line
, the growth of
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the coast
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coast
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coastline
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line
 did not as steep as
the
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the line of the lake
the line of the lakes
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lakes
line
, it started at 40
thousands
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thousand
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,
after
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and after
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 a dip in the second
year
, it steadily increased to 75
thousands
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thousand
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 in 20 years.
In addition
, the mountains
line
 only
have
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had
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 a subtle increase between the first and the
last
year
, which
were
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was
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 20 and 35
thousands
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thousand
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 in these two years.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words line, lakes, thousands, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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