You recently did a short course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how much cooking you have done since the course Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer.
Dear sir,
I am writing
this
letter to you as a form of feedback, which was asked by the department of your school.
Honestly speaking, I loved the course not only by learning some practical aspects but by making every kind of food especially Mexican and Chinese food which is more prevalent in the streets.Besides
this
, I do not have the words for a school faculty , who taught every student in well well-behaved way as well as
explained every concept , whenever it used to come about questioned.
There is a degree of truth in the fact that I am passionate about cooking , so after completing my course, I try to make new things every day , especially on different occasions such
as birthday parties and any other kind of gathering.
If you ask me, then
, in my opinion, you should add some recipes regarding the cakes because after finishing the course , I felt the need for sweet things such
as pastries which are always made in the same way as cakes are prepared.
Yours faithfully,
RIZASubmitted by rupindernagra73 on
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coherence cohesion
Work on structuring the letter with clear introductions, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Each paragraph should serve a distinct purpose and flow logically to the next.
greeting and closing
Improve the greeting and closing elements of your letter to align with formal letter conventions. For example, 'Dear Course Director' or 'Dear Sir/Madam' is more appropriate.
single idea per paragraph
Keep one idea per paragraph and fully expand on it for clarity and better coherence.
complete response
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suitable writing tone
Adopt a consistently formal tone throughout the letter, which is expected in a letter to a course director. Avoid informal language and expressions.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite