You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The graph
describe
Change the verb form
describes
about
the comparison of three places respectively where in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
Remove the preposition
apply
Accroding
to the chart, the mountain is the least popular one among the places Correct your spelling
According
whereas
the coast is the highest popular Linking Words
place
. In 1987, the Use synonyms
cost
Correct your spelling
coast
has
40 Wrong verb form
had
Use synonyms
millions
Change to singular
million
visitors
, the Use synonyms
mountains
Use synonyms
has
20 Wrong verb form
had
millons vistors
and the Correct your spelling
million visitors
lakes
Use synonyms
has
only 10 Wrong verb form
had
Use synonyms
millions
Change to singular
million
visitors
. But, the Use synonyms
lakes
became Use synonyms
popular
than the Correct quantifier usage
more popular
mountains
in 1997 Use synonyms
that
went up to about 40 Correct pronoun usage
which
millons
. When in 2002, the Correct your spelling
million
millions
lakes
sharply increased to about 75millions Use synonyms
visitors
. But, the trend Use synonyms
suddently
dropped to about 50 Correct your spelling
suddenly
millons
in 2007.
The coast fell back to 35 Correct your spelling
million
Use synonyms
millions
in 1992 but the Change to singular
million
visitors
gradually increased every year and it was the highest popular Use synonyms
place
in 2007 which reached Use synonyms
to
about 75 Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
millions
. Change to singular
million
Although
, the Linking Words
mountains
Use synonyms
was
the least Change the verb form
were
visitors
Use synonyms
place
and the Use synonyms
vistors
Correct your spelling
visitors
were
marginally increased from 1987 to 2007. In 2007, the Unnecessary verb
apply
Use synonyms
visitors
reached Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
to
about 35 Change preposition
apply
thousands
.
Change to singular
thousand
Overall
, the coast was the most popular choice Linking Words
at the end
of the year and the Linking Words
lakes
followed second Use synonyms
place
and the Use synonyms
mountains
Use synonyms
wasn't
Change the verb form
weren't
popluar
at that time.Correct your spelling
popular
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Vocabulary: Replace the words place, millions, visitors, mountains, lakes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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