You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The graph
describe
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about
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the comparison of three places respectively where in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
Accroding
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According
to the chart, the mountain is the least popular one among the places
whereas
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the coast is the highest popular
place
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. In 1987, the
cost
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coast
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has
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40
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millions
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million
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visitors
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, the
mountains
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has
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20
millons vistors
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million visitors
and the
lakes
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has
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only 10
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millions
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million
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visitors
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. But, the
lakes
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became
popular
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more popular
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than the
mountains
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in 1997
that
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which
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went up to about 40
millons
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million
millions
. When in 2002, the
lakes
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sharply increased to about 75millions
visitors
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. But, the trend
suddently
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suddenly
dropped to about 50
millons
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million
in 2007. The coast fell back to 35
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millions
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million
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in 1992 but the
visitors
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gradually increased every year and it was the highest popular
place
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in 2007 which reached
to
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about 75
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millions
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million
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.
Although
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, the
mountains
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was
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the least
visitors
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place
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and the
vistors
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visitors
were
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marginally increased from 1987 to 2007. In 2007, the
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visitors
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number of visitors
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reached
to
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about 35
thousands
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thousand
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.
Overall
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, the coast was the most popular choice
at the end
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of the year and the
lakes
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followed second
place
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and the
mountains
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wasn't
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popluar
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popular
at that time.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words place, millions, visitors, mountains, lakes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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