The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph illustrates the number of question
that Fix the agreement mistake
questions
tourist
information office received from 3 methods from January to Correct article usage
the tourist
Jun
.
Overall
, while
contacting
by person and telephone increased, the opposite could be seen in Replace the word
contact
email
. In most of the observed period, email
was the least ways
being used.
Standing at 800, Correct your spelling
leastways
telephone
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the telephone
a telephone
was
accounted for most of the Unnecessary verb
apply
method
tourists used in January. After remaining unchanged over 30 years, Fix the agreement mistake
methods
this
number slightly increased and reached 1000 in Jun
.
Similarly
, although
its starting point was the lowest, at 400, required through phoning increased moderately and surpassed email
at 600 in February and in person at 800 in March and reached 1100 in Jun
, the highest. (nên có mệnh để giải thích cho the highest)
On the other hand
, after hourvering
around 600 over 3 months, a significant Correct your spelling
hovering
hoovering
decreased
was witnessed by Replace the word
decrease
email
(meaning) in the second half of the observed period in Jun
(2 trạng ngữ không khớp với nhau
gây confused cho người đọc) which was 200, the lowest( cài gì thấp nhâtt - cần có giải thích cụ thể , one-sixth the highest method.Correct your spelling
that
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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