The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The flow chart explains how

glass

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is recycled in the

glass

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factory.Let us summarize the given flow chart . The formation of recycled

galss

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glass

has seven steps which

includes

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include

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collecting,Transportation,classification,Breaking of

galss

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glass

, Transportation to

factory

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the factory

a factory

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and

finally

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making of

glass

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Firstly

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,the different

glass

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bottles like green,brown and clear

glass

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bottles

are

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were

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gathered from

public

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the public

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,and

then

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it was

transfered

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transferred

to classification deport through vehicles .From the

seperating

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separating

deport they

are removing

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remove

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the cap from the bottle and

then

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they are

seperating

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separating

the caps into plastic caps and metal caps . The

glass

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bottle

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bottles

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are

then

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bought into

processing

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the processing

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plant and they

are breaking

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break

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the

glass

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into small pieces .They are moving it to

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glass

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a glass

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factory through road transport. The

glass

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and raw materials are dropped

in to

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into

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the Furnace and heated

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the

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temperature of 1200

degree

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degrees

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celcious

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celsius

Celcius

.After heating the melted materials are brought and

creating

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created in

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different shapes of

glass

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bottles.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words glass with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

152 words

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2. Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Today more and more people wants things instantly (e.g.: goods, services, news,). Why is it? Is it positive or negative development?