More and more plastic is polluting the city, countryside and ocean. What are the problems caused by plastic waste? What measures should be taken to solve these problems?

There is an issue among
society
about the rising number of
plastic
waste
arround
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around
the world.
This
issue can generate
the
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air and water
polution
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pollution
which
lead
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leads
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to the rise of other diseases and it can be solved by applying sustainable living in
society
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daily life. Essentially,
plastic
have
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two-ways
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two-way
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effect which
are
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air and water
polution
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pollution
and
along with
that
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they create
unecessary
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unnecessary
diseases.
First,
plastic
waste which is located
in
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the land
are
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hard to dismiss and when it is burned, it
will contaminate
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the air quality which
caused
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causes
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the
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lung disease.
For instance
, people who live near the burning place tend to
caugh
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cough
,
having
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asma
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asthma
, and so on.
Second,
plastic
in the water
also
become a harmful thing for the fishes and other living thing there. When they are affected,
society
who live in coastal
area
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also
will be affected
with
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chemical
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chemicals
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because
fishes
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fish
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, which already
ate
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eaten
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the
plastic
, are their main food.
In addition
, those people will deal with cancer because they eat
chemical
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chemicals
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which involved in the
fishes
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fish
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.
Therefore
, the alternative solution for
this
issue is getting
use
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to the sustainable living habit. There will always be
plastic
in our daily
life
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, and
government
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the government
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cannot simply
banned
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the
use
of it because
plastic
is usable in some things.
That is
why, as individuals, they can reduce their
plastic
usage by
this
habit.
This
action can be illustrated by the
use
of
tumblr
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as a bottle -not
plastic
- that they can
use
all the time and
recyling
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recycle
the
plastic
into useful
thing
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things
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:
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like chair
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chair
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chairs
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,
table
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, garbage, and so on. In conclusion,
plastic
is
main
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problem in many areas
in
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the world that can
caused
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cause
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a variety of
disease
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diseases
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and the action that
public
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the public
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can do as the solution is
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to
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deal with
the
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sustainable living.
This
is an easy thing that
society
can do, in order to help
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the government
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government
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the government
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to
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reduce the
plastic
waste in our places.
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task achievement
Consider developing a clear introductory paragraph that explicitly addresses the question, outlining the main topics to be discussed, as well as a more comprehensive conclusion that reiterates the key points and your stance on the issue.
coherence and cohesion
Work on organizing your essay with a more logical structure. Introduce each main point in a new paragraph, ensuring that there is a clear topic sentence that indicates what the paragraph will be about.
task achievement
Support your main points with specific, detailed examples. General statements do not suffice to illustrate the issues and solutions surrounding plastic pollution. Draw on real-world statistics, well-known studies, or hypothetical scenarios to strengthen your arguments.

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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution
  • ecosystems
  • microplastics
  • degradation
  • contamination
  • wildlife
  • health risks
  • financial resources
  • food chain
  • visual appeal
  • ingestion
  • entanglement
  • urban areas
  • natural landscapes
  • waste management
  • sustainability
  • recycling
  • biodegradable
  • public awareness
  • legislation
  • regulation
  • single-use plastics
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