More and more plastic is polluting the city, countryside and ocean. What are the problems caused by plastic waste? What measures should be taken to solve these problems?
There is an issue among deal with
society
about the rising number of plastic
waste arround
the world. Correct your spelling
around
This
issue can generate the
air and water Correct article usage
apply
polution
which Correct your spelling
pollution
lead
to the rise of other diseases and it can be solved by applying sustainable living in Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
society
daily life.
Essentially, Change noun form
society's
plastic
have
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has
two-ways
effect which Correct your spelling
two-way
are
air and water Change the verb form
is
polution
and Correct your spelling
pollution
along with
that
they create Add a comma
that,
unecessary
diseases. Correct your spelling
unnecessary
First,
plastic
waste which is located in
the land Change preposition
on
are
hard to dismiss and when it is burned, it Change the verb form
is
will contaminate
the air quality which Wrong verb form
contaminates
caused
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causes
the
lung disease. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, people who live near the burning place tend to caugh
, Correct your spelling
cough
having
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have
asma
, and so on. Correct your spelling
asthma
Second,
plastic
in the water also
become a harmful thing for the fishes and other living thing there. When they are affected, society
who live in coastal area
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areas
also
will be affected with
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by
chemical
because Fix the agreement mistake
chemicals
fishes
, which already Fix the agreement mistake
fish
ate
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eaten
plastic
, are their main food. In addition
, those people will deal with cancer because they eat chemical
which involved in the Fix the agreement mistake
chemicals
fishes
.
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fish
Therefore
, the alternative solution for this
issue is getting use
to the sustainable living habit. There will always be Change the verb form
used
plastic
in our daily life
, and Fix the agreement mistake
lives
government
cannot simply Correct article usage
the government
banned
the Wrong verb form
ban
use
of it because plastic
is usable in some things. That is
why, as individuals, they can reduce their plastic
usage by this
habit. This
action can be illustrated by the use
of tumblr
as a bottle -not Change the capitalization
Tumblr
plastic
- that they can use
all the time and recyling
the Correct your spelling
recycle
plastic
into useful thing
: Fix the agreement mistake
things
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like chair
chair
, Fix the agreement mistake
chairs
table
, garbage, and so on.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
tables
plastic
is main
problem in many areas Change the article
the main
in
the world that can Change preposition
of
caused
a variety of Change the verb form
cause
be caused
disease
and the action that Fix the agreement mistake
diseases
public
can do as the solution isCorrect article usage
the public
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to
the
sustainable living. Correct article usage
apply
This
is an easy thing that society
can do, in order to help Correct article usage
the government
government
Correct article usage
the government
to
reduce the Verb problem
apply
plastic
waste in our places.Submitted by e.warikar on
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task achievement
Consider developing a clear introductory paragraph that explicitly addresses the question, outlining the main topics to be discussed, as well as a more comprehensive conclusion that reiterates the key points and your stance on the issue.
coherence and cohesion
Work on organizing your essay with a more logical structure. Introduce each main point in a new paragraph, ensuring that there is a clear topic sentence that indicates what the paragraph will be about.
task achievement
Support your main points with specific, detailed examples. General statements do not suffice to illustrate the issues and solutions surrounding plastic pollution. Draw on real-world statistics, well-known studies, or hypothetical scenarios to strengthen your arguments.