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the diagram shows the floor plan of public library 20 years ago and how it looks now the diagram shows the floor plan of public library 20 years ago and how it looks now

the diagram shows the floor plan of public library 20 years ago and how it looks now the diagram shows the floor plan of public library 20 years ago and how it looks now
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The floor plan shows the central
library
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 which was built 20 years ago with different types and classifications of
books
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 kept across different sections and rooms across each corner. Today the
library
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 sections are more organized with good space for students to navigate across the
library
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, the
library
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 is more structured and very spacious compared to the
library
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 built 20 years ago In terms of the former plan, once you enter, there are tables and chairs arranged for students to read, Adjacent to that on the left-hand
side
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 there is a section for adult fiction
books
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 and on the
right
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side
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, you can see the
room
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 which is the adult nonfiction
books
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. So, on the left
side
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 of the fiction
book
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 section, you can see the
room
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 for CDs, videos and computer games. The other
room
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 which is on the other
side
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 which is near the
entrance
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 is the
room
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 for reading newspapers and magazines. On the
right
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 of the
entrance
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, you can find the enquiry desk for tickets
book
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 returns, etc, The other
side
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 is where you can find children's
books
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 So compared to that, currently, the new
library
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 doesn’t have tables or chairs at the centre and
instead
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, it has sofas in the children’s fiction
book
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 area and it is located in the top extreme left corner from the
entrance
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 and there is a reference
book
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 section below and there is a computer
room
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 below which is at the left
side
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 of the
entrance
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. There is a café on the
right
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side
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 of the
entrance
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 and adjacent to that it has the information desk and self-service machines. On the extreme
right
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 corner from the
entrance
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, you can see the lecture
room
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, books, side, right, room, book, entrance with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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