The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

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of soil degradation in

1990’s

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the 1990’s

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;

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the degrees of

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soil productivity decrease in three various territories

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the same decade are discussed.

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, it is explicit that generally over-grazing played the most crucial role in

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among the studied areas, it was Europe that had the most damage. Regarding the scheme, what stands out is that over-grazing with 35%

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productivity reduction.

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deforestation and over-cultivation with a minor difference were in the second and third ranks.

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the other parameters with only 7 per cent were at the least and

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place.

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to the table, the most and the least

degradaded

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degraded

regions were Europe and North America, 23% and 5% respectively. In more detail, over-cultivation had no impact on Oceania;

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the most harm was associated

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over-grazing.

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and over-cultivation were the most imperative reasons in North America and Europe separately.