The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates how many visitors will be touring a specific Carribean Island from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
,of the total number of tourists some decided to stay on ships and others on the island but the destination saw an increase in visitors over the Linking Words
7 year
period.
The visitors on the cruise ships were less than half a Add a hyphen
7-year
million
in 2010 Use synonyms
while
those who stayed Linking Words
in
the destinationChange preposition
at
,
were more than half a Remove the comma
apply
million
but things soon changed when the people of the former group,outnumbered the latter after 2015 . It followed a gradual increase until they reached their peak in 2017 at exactly 2 Use synonyms
million
which accounted for more than half of the total tourists in Use synonyms
this
year.
Linking Words
Meanwhile
as for those who enjoyed their stay in cruises, their number dropped by a bit after 2015 and showed a negligible fall before once again following the same trend at only 1.5 Add a comma
Meanwhile,
million
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 3 times.
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