The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line chart illustrates how many visitors will be touring a specific Carribean Island from 2010 to 2017.

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,of the total number of tourists some decided to stay on ships and others on the island but the destination saw an increase in visitors over the

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period. The visitors on the cruise ships were less than half a

million

in 2010

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those who stayed

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were more than half a

million

but things soon changed when the people of the former group,outnumbered the latter after 2015 . It followed a gradual increase until they reached their peak in 2017 at exactly 2

million

which accounted for more than half of the total tourists in

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as for those who enjoyed their stay in cruises, their number dropped by a bit after 2015 and showed a negligible fall before once again following the same trend at only 1.5

million

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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fluctuation
peak
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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.

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