A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

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serves as a major source of livelihood for

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in many countries.

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, poor

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management approaches can cause problems that may affect many economies around the world. In

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essay, I will outline what I consider to be the potential

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of

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some of the negative outcomes that I feel are likely to occur, and explain why I feel that there are more significant

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. In terms of the numerous benefits of

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in the modern world, there are two main

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helps to increase and boost the revenue of the economy. By raising the taxes on various activities for tourists,

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paying for hotel rooms and other services, the government will have the opportunity to improve and develop more infrastructures.

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could include new roads, brand new public transportation, better and more organized airports, and building new tourist attractions.

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, these improvements (adaptations) will attract more foreigners, not only for visiting purposes

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amazing systems and services that the

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could offer. Another benefit (

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) is that new infrastructures and businesses will help to open up job opportunities and increase employment for

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in that

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will benefit thousands of

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and generally help them to support themselves and their

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, citizens may experience an increase in their income per year, new promotions, and

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a brighter future for both the

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and their

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.  There are,

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, possible drawbacks of

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in some countries.

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enormous stress on the local environment, as it has been proven that too many tourists in one

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can produce a significant amount of waste products and pollution.

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will lead to a negative impact on the environment,

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it will cause an incredible strain on local waste management, resulting in landfills and sewage plants overflowing, which could possibly affect the water system.

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, overcrowding and overuse of environmental resources can threaten many endangered species where their natural habitats are invaded and lost.  In conclusion, even though

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could cause negative effects

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the environment,

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is considered vital to the success of the

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. In my view, the

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contribute a lot to the

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in their everyday lives, outweighing the disadvantages.