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The chart below shows male and female fitness membership in Thailand between 1985 and 2015.

The chart below shows male and female fitness membership in Thailand between 1985 and 2015.
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The bar chart illustrates the male and female
fitness
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memberships
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 in Thailand from 1985 to 2015. Throughout the three decades, both genders experienced distinct fluctuations, with men displaying a more erratic pattern. Notably, the number of males engaged in
fitness
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 surpassed females during the entire period under consideration. Commencing at 2100 in 1985, male
fitness
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memberships
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 were twice as high as those of females, who stood at 1000.
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 figure rose sharply to 3900 in 1990, only to decline rapidly to 1900 by 2000. The pinnacle was reached in 2010, with 5000 male
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, but plummeted by 80% in 2015, marking the lowest point in the observed period. Remarkably, despite the fluctuations, male
memberships
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 exceeded those of females in 1985, 1990, 1995, and 2010.
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, female
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memberships
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, starting at 1200 in 1985, were half of
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 male counterparts. Despite a substantial increase to nearly 2000 in 1990,
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 number slightly dropped to 1800 over the next 5
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. For the initial 15
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, female
memberships
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 consistently lagged behind males. In 2000, there was a significant surge to 3000, slightly surpassing the male count of 1800.
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, female
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 fluctuated markedly between 2000 and 3000 over the next 15
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, witnessing a decline of 1000 to reach 2000 in 2015. In conclusion, the three-decade analysis reveals notable gender-specific trends in
fitness
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memberships
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 in Thailand.
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 men exhibited a more erratic pattern, their numbers consistently exceeded those of women, except in the year 2000. The dynamics of male and female
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 engagement reflect the changing health and lifestyle choices over the
years
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.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fitness, memberships, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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