The maps below compare 2 floor plans of one trade conference held in 2009 and 2010.

The maps below compare 2 floor plans of one trade conference held in 2009 and 2010.
The map compares the layout of a trade show as it was planned in 2009 with a proposed design in 2010.
It is clear that
the main changes involved the expansion of the exhibition area. There were no plans to change the two gates. In 2009, a refreshment was located in the middle of the two entrances and a registration was located next to the original balcony. In 2010, these two places were swapped with each other.
Furthermore
, the balcony was used for an additional purpose as a lounge area. The main and side entrances remained in the same location. As the exhibition space expanded, a meeting room had been demolished and the conference hall had been laid to the right corner beside the new lounge area. To be precise, the new exhibition allowed more display stands;
however
, there were fewer available seats for people to attend the conference hall and the stage was built in front of the seats.
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