the graph below shows average carbon dioxide(co2) emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden,Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
The provided graph reveals the information
of
individual average carbon dioxide (CO2) Change preposition
on
emission
in 4 countries from 1967 to 2007.
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emissions
Overall
, it can be seen that the largest proportion of personal CO2 emission
was in Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
United
Kingdom, followed by Sweden Correct article usage
the United
along with
a downward trend. In contrast
, Italy and Portugal show an upward tendency during surveyed
period.
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the surveyed
It is clear that
the most contribution of average CO2 emission
was Bristish
which stood at approximately 11 Correct your spelling
Britain
tonnes
per person at the beginning and decreased slowly to about 9 tonnes
at the end
but still was the most popular country among all countries. In comparison, Sweden was
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the
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start
at 9 Replace the word
started
tonnes
individual
CO2 Change preposition
of individual
emission
in 1967 and peaked at around 11 Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
tonnes
in 1977 while
the figures was fall
sharply to below 6 Change the verb form
fell
tonnes
in 2007.
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hand, Correct your spelling
other
Italy
and Change noun form
Italy's
Portugal
CO2 Change noun form
Portugal's
emission
had a similar upward trend, Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
started
at about 4 Wrong verb form
starting
tonnes
and 1 tonne and both rose gradually to 8 tonnes
and 5 tonnes
, respectively.Submitted by llavina61 on
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