the graph below shows average carbon dioxide(co2) emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden,Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

the graph below shows average carbon dioxide(co2) emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden,Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
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individual average carbon dioxide (CO2)
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emissions
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in 4 countries from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, it can be seen that the largest proportion of personal CO2
emission
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was in
United
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Kingdom, followed by Sweden
along with
a downward trend.
In contrast
, Italy and Portugal show an upward tendency during
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period.
It is clear that
the most contribution of average CO2
emission
was
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Britain
which stood at approximately 11
tonnes
per person at the beginning and decreased slowly to about 9
tonnes
at the end
but still was the most popular country among all countries. In comparison, Sweden
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start
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at 9
tonnes
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CO2
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emissions
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in 1967 and peaked at around 11
tonnes
in 1977
while
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sharply to below 6
tonnes
in 2007. On the
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hand,
Italy
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and
Portugal
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CO2
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emissions
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had a similar upward trend,
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at about 4
tonnes
and 1 tonne and both rose gradually to 8
tonnes
and 5
tonnes
, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words co, emission, tonnes with synonyms.
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