The chart below shows the information on how frequently people in the USA ate in fastfood restaurants between 2003 and 2013

The chart below shows the information on how frequently people in the USA ate in fastfood restaurants between 2003 and 2013
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bar chart provided above
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illustrates how frequently individuals in the United States of America had in fast
food
resturants
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restaurants
over 3
specefic
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specific
years 2003,2006 and 2013. From the first perspective, we can find that eating fast
food
both once a week and once or twice a month is
preffered
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preferred
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people
.
Subsequently
, individuals that ate
everyday
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or never had the least rate of the chart.
Firstly
, the figure indicates the percentage of
people
who ate fast
food
either several times a week or once a week, had a mere growth from 15 per
cent
and somewhere in
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of 31 per
cent
respectively in 2006, followed by a
further
drop to about 16 per
cent
and 27 per
cent
respectively in 2013. The figure of
people
who had fast
food
a few times a year had a negligible growth from 12 per
cent
to 15 per
cent
in 2006 and
then
steadily continued until 2013.
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the end, the frequency of eating fast
food
hasn't been reduced in America and its
people
don't have a healthy lifestyle.
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