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The table shows expenditures four car companies on advertising in UK in 2002.

The table shows expenditures four car companies on advertising in UK in 2002.
The table chart illustrates the amount of money that four automobile
companies
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, namely Renault, Rover, Vauxhall and Cetirizine on marketing in the UK by 2002.
Overall
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it is clear that
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 the Renaulth
spend
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 money
for
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on
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 promoting during 2002.
In addition
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on
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TV had the highest in other advertising;
whereas
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, the promotion on Radio
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 the similariest cost of types of advertising. Looking for more details, the company payment for publicity on TV in the Cetirizine group sold
highest
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 than other communities at 70 million dollars.
Likewise
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price
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the price
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 for promotion in the Renault association on cinema and press sold
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highest
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 than other
companies
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. Regarding of four
companies
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 for the investment
on
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 radio
by
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the cost
were
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 as payment as other
companies
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 at 15 million dollars. By the same token, Renault company paymented as price as Cetirizine company at 7 million dollars.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words companies with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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