The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newsport city centre from 2003-2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparations where relevant

The line graph given illustrates the changes that

occured

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occurred

in 3 specific districts of crime in the centre of

Newsport

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Newport

city over the period of 2003 to 2012.

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,

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from the information that the chart above

provided

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we can find that automobile

theft

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and robbery had approximately a steady trend, burglary had a

considerably

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fluctuation.

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with, the rate of

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from shops had a negligible rise from under 3500 to about 3700 in 2004, followed by a

markedly

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slip to somewhere in the vicinity of 1200 in 2008,

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steadily continued with a mere fluctuation under 1500 until 2012.

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, the number of car

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with a steady trend was around 2700 in 2005,

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it had a drop to around 2000 in 2006, followed by a negligible rise

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2500 in 2012. The diagram shows that the

theft

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from the person had a steady trend between 500 and 1000. In the end,

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all of these 3 specific figures changed exponentially, car

theft

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was the top

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at the end

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of the graph.