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The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
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The line graph compares the places which
visited
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were visited
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 by overseas tourists in a European country over a period of
thirty-years
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thirty years
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.
Overall
, there are
a
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sustainable changes
due to
 the coast and
the lakes visitors
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the lake's visitors
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,
while
 the mountains,
in contrast
, show
a
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apply
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fewer. In 1987, 40
thousands
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thousand
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of
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apply
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inhabitants decided to
chose
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 the coast as their destination,
while
 other areas showed approximately under
a
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half of
this
 amount, 20 and 10
thousands
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thousand
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, respectively. The coast,
such
 as the most relevant area,
then
 declined
roughly
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by roughly
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 35
thousands
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thousand
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. Despite
this
, by 2007 it
has
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had
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 shown a
rapidly
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rapid
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 increase
up
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of up
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 to 75
thousands
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thousand
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of
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apply
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visitors. Meanwhile, there are prominent changes in the amount of people who
visited
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visit
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 the lakes. By 2002
this
 choice
has
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had
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 peaked from 10 to 75
thousands
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thousand
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, almost more than 700 per cent.
After
this
, the trend shows
dramatic
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a dramatic
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decrase
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decrease
 till 2007. The mountains, in its turn, have
a steady changes
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a steady change
steady changes
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comapred
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compared
 to others over the period given. By 2007, it ups from 20 to 35
thousands
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thousand
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words thousands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • number of
  • areas
  • European country
  • between
  • 1987 and 2000
  • graph
  • introduce
  • overview
  • trends
  • describe
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • summarize
  • main findings
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