The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates how

sugar

is manufactured from

sugar

cane.

Overall

,

the

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apply

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sugar

production requires four main stages including farming, extracting, processing and drying. Looking at the farming and extracting stages,

it

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starts

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start

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by

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with

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planting

sugar

canes

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cane

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and growing

them

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it

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in 12 to 18 months.

Then

, they are harvested either by agricultural vehicles or by hand.

At

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In

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the third stage,

sugar

canes

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cane

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are

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is

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passed into a crusher machine and

juice

is extracted.

Next,

the

juice

is introduced into a limestone filler to eliminate bad substances and become pure

juice

. Turning to the other stages, the pure

juice

is boiled at

high

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a high

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temperature in an evaporator to remove water and condenses into syrup. In the next stage, the syrup is poured into a centrifuge and spun at high speed to detach

sugar

crystals from it.

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the final stage, the crystals are dried and cooled in a large container to produce finished

sugar

.