The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use.

The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use.
The chart illustrates the diagram of solar panels, which are used to convert sun energy to heat
air
and
water
. As a structure, the solar panel is a square, flattened case with two pipes attached on two sides opposite to each other. These pipes are an inlet, to pass
air
or
water
in and an outlet,
on the contrary
, to deliver heated sources to consumers.
Above all
, the squared construction is covered with a transparent plate through which sunlight passes through. The device which is to be used to heat
air
functions are
follows
Correct word choice
as follows
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: chilled
air
is sucked through an inlet line into the flattened reservoir, and a transparent top absorbs sun rays, thereby heating the
air
inside. After a
while
, the heated
air
passes through the outlet pipeline to be delivered to an end user. Hot
water
processing with that machinery starts with
pumping
Add an article
the pumping
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of cold
water
via
inlet
Correct article usage
an inlet
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pipe into the box, which in
this
case, compared to an
air
reservoir, contains a piped coil.
Such
coil
Correct article usage
a coil
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absorbs the warmth of sunlight energy penetrated through the clear panel.
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