The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use.
The chart illustrates the diagram of solar panels, which are used to convert sun energy to heat
air
and water
.
As a structure, the solar panel is a square, flattened case with two pipes attached on two sides opposite to each other. These pipes are an inlet, to pass air
or water
in and an outlet, on the contrary
, to deliver heated sources to consumers. Above all
, the squared construction is covered with a transparent plate through which sunlight passes through.
The device which is to be used to heat air
functions are follows
: chilled Correct word choice
as follows
air
is sucked through an inlet line into the flattened reservoir, and a transparent top absorbs sun rays, thereby heating the air
inside. After a while
, the heated air
passes through the outlet pipeline to be delivered to an end user.
Hot water
processing with that machinery starts with pumping
of cold Add an article
the pumping
water
via inlet
pipe into the box, which in Correct article usage
an inlet
this
case, compared to an air
reservoir, contains a piped coil. Such
coil
absorbs the warmth of sunlight energy penetrated through the clear panel.Correct article usage
a coil
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