The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.
The line graph provides details about the number of
patients
in birth control, eye, diabetic, and dental clinics in a hospital from 2010 to 2016, measured in numbers. Use synonyms
Overall
, eye and diabetic centres had the tendency to increase from time to time, Linking Words
while
birth control and dental clinics tended to fluctuate.
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Firstly
, the visitors of to the eye centre was around 125 at the beginning of the reporting period before moderately increasing to 150 in the next two Linking Words
years
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Moreover
, in 2014 and 2016, the Linking Words
patients
leveraged by 100 annually. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, the diabetic clinic consistently accounted for less than a hundred Linking Words
patients
from 2010 to 2014, Use synonyms
however
, the figure spiked to approximately 175 in the year 2016.
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On the other hand
, despite a moderate rise of around 25 Linking Words
patients
from Use synonyms
initially
almost 250 visitors in 2012 and a significant increase in 2016 which equalized the final number to the initial figure, the birth control service had experienced a dramatic drop from 275 Linking Words
in
2012 to 175 in the following two Change preposition
apply
years
. Use synonyms
Lastly
, apart from a 50 drop in the first two Linking Words
years
, the number of people who visited dental care in the hospital rose from 50 in 2012 to 125 in the next four Use synonyms
years
.Use synonyms
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