The chart belows shows the percentage of students joining North West University

The chart belows shows the percentage of students joining North West University
The provided pie charts depict the proportion of
people
commencing their studies at
North West
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University. At
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first glance, the amount of
students
coming from South America outnumbers the portion of
people
coming from other continents, being the most represented continent. The reverse is the case for Africans, portraying the smallest minority among
people
joining the University.
Moreover
, the discipline that was chosen the most by new
students
was Art, followed by Computing and Science. It was quite the opposite for Medicine, which was selected the least. Going into
further
detail, a significant quantity of South Americans is seen, representing 79
students
of the total. They are followed by Europeans,
Asian
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and Australians (considering 21, 6 and 4
people
respectively).
Lastly
, only 2
africans
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are part of the current student cohort. Another point worth noting is that 23% of North West University newcomers opted to follow Arts for their studies. Computing accounted for the second highest selected field with 22% of new
students
, followed by 21% for Science.
In contrast
, as little as 5% of them joined med school.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrollment
  • percentage
  • trend
  • peak
  • trough
  • faculty
  • department
  • fluctuate
  • demographics
  • academic year
  • popularity
  • reputation
  • external factors
  • job market
  • predict
  • analyze
  • comparison
  • statistical data
  • chart
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