The maps below show the layouts of nature Museum between 2010 and 2013.
The two maps show information about the differences in
room
changes in nature museums over a three-year period. Overall
, the museums added some exhibitions and became more extensive.
To begin
with, in 2010, on the right side
of the museum, there was a garden where you could enjoy the view from the ocean hall. However
, there is a dinosaurus
and mammals Correct your spelling
dinosaur
dinosaurs
room
at the time on the left side
.
On the other hand
, the museum changed in 2013 time. As we can see on the right side
, it becomes an ice age room
. Before, there was a mammal room
. After that, there was a small room
called an insect. On the right side
, there are three rooms: a shop and
, more giant mammals and some human origins display space, and precisely in the corner, there is a cafe Correct word choice
apply
room
. Moreover
, Ocean Hall's ticket desk and entrance room
stay the same.Submitted by waauliya011 on
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