The chart below shows information about students studying six main subjects at a US university in 2010.
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bar chart illustrates the number of students who majored in 6 subjects at an American university in 2010.
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Overall
, all the courses of study experienced a distinct ratio between the two genders, except finance and engineering.Linking Words
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finance was the most favourable in both groups, the opposite could be seen in engineering.
Among all subjects that attracted more females, 120 learners chose marketing, which was more than men 45 people. Linking Words
Similarly
, the number of women who specialised in accounting was 200, more than marketing 80.
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On the other hand
, in the male-prefered courses, there were 200 men studying math, four times higher than the opposite sex. Linking Words
In addition
, economics attracted 80 males, double the total of females and 50 people less than those (males)who opted for mathematics. Sharing the same learners Linking Words
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50, engineering was the least favourite subject, Change preposition
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numbers
of people pursuing finance was the highest in both genders at 225 each.Fix the agreement mistake
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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