The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000.

The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000.
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The line graph gives information about the
number
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of
marriages
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and divorces in the UK over a
period
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of 25 years.
Overall
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,
while
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the
number
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of
marriages
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increased over the
period
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, the
number
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of first
marriages
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declined. The
figure
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for divorces rose steadily. There were almost 500,000
marriages
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in the UK in 1975, and
this
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figure
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rose steadily to reach a peak of 640,000 in 1985. Despite a gradual decrease
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to 560,000
in 1995, the
number
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rose again to 570,000
at the end
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of the
period
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.
By contrast
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,
although
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the
figure
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for first
marriages
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rose from 370,000 to 410,000 from 1975 to 1985, the
number
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then
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declined steadily to just over 300,000 in 2020.
However
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,
whereas
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the
figure
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for second
marriages
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stood at only 200,000 in 1975,
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rose to 260,000 by the end of the
period
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. In 1975, there were only 80,000 divorces,
although
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this
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number
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more than doubled over the next 5 years. The numbers
then
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witnessed an increase to reach a peak of 250,000 by 2020, at times overtaking the figures for second
marriages
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, marriages, period, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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