The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000.

The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000.
The line graph gives information about the
number
of
marriages
and divorces in the UK over a
period
of 25 years.
Overall
,
while
the
number
of
marriages
increased over the
period
, the
number
of first
marriages
declined. The
figure
for divorces rose steadily. There were almost 500,000
marriages
in the UK in 1975, and
this
figure
rose steadily to reach a peak of 640,000 in 1985. Despite a gradual decrease
to560,000
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to 560,000
in 1995, the
number
rose again to 570,000
at the end
of the
period
.
By contrast
,
although
the
figure
for first
marriages
rose from 370,000 to 410,000 from 1975 to 1985, the
number
then
declined steadily to just over 300,000 in 2020.
However
,
whereas
the
figure
for second
marriages
stood at only 200,000 in 1975,
this
rose to 260,000 by the end of the
period
. In 1975, there were only 80,000 divorces,
although
this
number
more than doubled over the next 5 years. The numbers
then
witnessed an increase to reach a peak of 250,000 by 2020, at times overtaking the figures for second
marriages
.
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